An author's bane is a review that tells the story for them. Not just a synopsis but a revealing of certain key points about the characters, plot or motivation that a reader should have to discover from reading the book itself, not a review.
A review can allude to key points without actually stating what they are with specifics. It can be avoided and should be at all costs.
Take a look at these two reviews. I think one skirts into "Spoiler Land" and the other hints and teases. From an author's perspective, are they both good or is one as close as I think it is to telling too much?
Option ONE The Fire Lord’s Lover (Elven Lords, Book 1) by Kathryne Kennedy
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Option TWO The Fire Lord’s Lover (Elven Lords, Book 1) by Kathryne Kennedy
There actually is a lot to like in the first review. I clearly get a feel that the reviewer read the book and did enjoy herself. But at any point did she go too far?
What do you think?
If not - I think you can see where it easily could have.
And if so, by seeing this comparison it might help to illustrate what I mean about spoilers because sometimes we all learn better through example.
Show not tell.
My question: Did the reviewer skirt the spoiler line or did she cross?
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